Hello guys remember the activity has to be posted here; In my personal opinion I don't like to play with lottery because I think it is better when you get something with effort. On the other hand sometimes is good to get extra help, but without forgetting that all things which coming by water, by water will go.
here you have some stories from people who have won the lottery.
http://www.businesspundit.com/10-people-who-won-the-lottery-then-lost-it-all/
here you have some stories from people who have won the lottery.
http://www.businesspundit.com/10-people-who-won-the-lottery-then-lost-it-all/
Dear Huck,
ResponderEliminarI am writing this letter to share with you the happiness that comes my life today; with the money that I received of lottery I’ve bought a beautiful house, is very wide, it has four rooms and a pool. Can you believe it? I feel very happy, although I have spent all prize money in it, I inverted all my savings to buy the furniture that I’ve ever wanted. Now when you want you can come with your family, I won’t have to live with my mother that somehow was becoming a trouble.
Now our dream to being independent is finally nearing reality.
With love your friend Daniela.
Daniela i told you in class you are writing great. 4,5
EliminarANDRES DAVID SANCHEZ EUSSE
ResponderEliminarIn my personal opinión, if I won one hundred and twenty thousand dollars I had chosen to study a four-year degree program at a major US university because with a know specific, I can I improve the management the money. I think doing this is the best option because as the risk of failing with fortune, is less.
after of this if have succeed the projects, I can I buy a luxury automovile, A comfortable home near the mississippi river, and to because no, a nine-month world cruise, also to help the family.
I think if the life, I provides the luck of win the lottery, depends of my take the decisions correct not to fail
Andres in class we corrected you writing I thing you are doing a very good effort. 3,5
EliminarDear Huck,My name is Mauro and my decision to spend this money would be for my future.
ResponderEliminarThe only picture that represents my likes is number one. (A four-year degree program at a major US university) Other pictures I do not like because I would be nothing left for me. The picture (2.A nine –month world cruise). It's only travel. And after that what? The picture (3.A luxury automobile). It is an expensive car.How I keep it? The picture (4.A comfortable home near the Mississippi River). The house is beautiful but I need to be academically prepared to have a good job and be able to sustain.
These are my reasons for my decision to spend $120.000 dollars
Mauro there are some mistakes but I think you wrote and posted great what you wanted. 4,0
EliminarFirst:
ResponderEliminar$1 in those days would be worth $20 today, that means: $6.000 x 20 = $ 120.000
!!This is a lot of money¡¡
Dear Huck:
In this letter I want to tell you about what would be my answer to the question: ¿how to spend the money if I gain the lottery?, and the reasons for which it would do it:
My choice would be the first one (A four year grade program at the major US university); ¿way this election?, because, being very showy the others, but in my personal opinion, I see the learning and the knowledge, much more important than many things that can be had in the life; it is of these things that contribute something positive to your life, also having a professional title of an important university in the world, is key to obtain big opportunities at labor and managerial level. I think that this is a good way of invest the money that each one obtains, since the efforts done in some moment of the life, will turn back reflected later.
I hope that you understand my words and serve to you as help.
Yours,
Andres Felipe Tirado.
Andres I told you what mistakes you had, I think you are a great Ss, but remember something which my principal remember me all days "there aren't Stupid questions, just there are Stupid people who don't ask. 4,6
EliminarDear Huck
ResponderEliminarI decide to study 4 years degree program at a major us university, because I want to be a good professional get a satisfaction personal I would to have my biz, and to grow work environment
I believe than train me for the future is better passing things I move away from true happiness because what one learns what is knowledge for all life.
Leidy what you mean with a major us?, and remember adjective first, (personal satisfaction). your redaction was something confuse for me, can you tell me what you mean in Spanish please. 3,0
EliminarDear huck..
ResponderEliminarIf I win a lottery I would spend money traveling around the world because this always have been my dream, to know new cultures, new places, new people and try food of this places, The second thing that I would do, to buy a big house with a large garden where my dad and mom spend the rest of their lifes without problems, the third most important thing I would do is invest money in companies, of this way, the money will be profitable, or why not; create my company.
I think is better know how spend your money, because many people don´t know to spend and manage it; I know it´s so hard to win the lottery but I hope it.
Your friend..
Juan Sebastian Gonzalez Forero
Sebastian traveling is my dream too. ok look remember Always goes after the the main verb, for example ( this has Always been my dream), but you did a good job. 4,0
EliminarIn my personal opinion, no , i don't work to grt my own things,because I value more what you get with effort and I do not like gambling.
ResponderEliminarbrayan cano
Brayan I think your posted was poor, you can do it better. 2,5
EliminarI wish I had this house comfortable, but if it is near the Mississippi River,
ResponderEliminarSince this occurs with the most beautiful fantasy and tranquility of a human, enjoy the calm of nature and the beauty of having a good house.
Dear Huck
I took this decision to have this comfortable home because this is a great investment, and a good property, in working life working hard to have a home among other thing, I think is most important for all people. In this dream come true to have their children where they are safe, after taking this can fight for other things without much effort
Nain as I told you people can make many mistakes whe are writing, but if other person understand what they said it is great. I understood everything you need to correct some things but you have the idea. good job. 4,0
Eliminarwith this money I will study in the best university the united states, because thanks to this study will improve the quality of life for my family and to me, although I admit that the other options are very tempting but if analyzed only generate costs that I can not cover, equal when you finish my study if I put effort and dedication necessary Could you give me that luxury later.
ResponderEliminarJaime I think you can write more please next time try it. 2,8
EliminarI am interested in four-year university education is more important than the luxury material, because this is going and there are only memories, but having a college degree is the future to be an important person later and to achieve what one dreams, won't play with lottery because it is something ephemeral, and that goes with the wind...
ResponderEliminarcomentario de jose johan gomez muñoz
Johan I think you need to practice more you writing becasue I didn't understand much. 1,5
EliminarDEAR HUCK,
ResponderEliminarMy name is Juan Fdo Rivillas, the truth if I won all that money, I opt for the trip on a cruise, because I am a person that love travel and the truth I know almost all Colombia, also could be very interesting to know other countries and other people in this trip.
Also be out of countries is very relaxing.
The other options are very good but a car is very expensive for maintain, the house is very beautiful but I do not like near a river because I think that is dangerous and study is good option but firs the trip.
Best regards
Juan fdo, you are doing well, you need to use more connectors but I understood everything, try to practice more, great job. 3,0
EliminarMy name is brayan , wiht this money I will study in the best university the italy, Since in this country have a great technology and advancement in the automotriz.me field specialize very well and after finishing my study; I will have a better chance of finding work, and so give me a better quality of life both for me and for my family, and because not later give me those luxuries of home, car and cruise.
ResponderEliminarBRAYAN CANO
as I told you try it better.
Eliminardear huck
ResponderEliminarwith de money earned from the lottery i would buy a luxury car because it has always been my dreams to ride one of those cars if i buy it, i will open the engine hatch just to see its desing. to feel the adrenaline while driving and feel the engine power.
Hey good dream, I liked it.It was short try to do it better next time. 3,0
EliminarGeimar Lopez
ResponderEliminari`ve always like the german technology in all type of machinery, for me, in that little money would go to germany I to study and would invest on property.
hello, my name is didier madrid group 3 level 4 thuesday 6 to 10 my question is strategics for reading number one or two, in class copy number one.
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